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What's Wrong with These Sentences?

 

How did you go?

Did they all look OK to you?

Hmm ... you may be surprised to learn that there's a common error in every sentence! Let's take a look:

1. There's lots of animals at the zoo.

Animals is a plural noun - there are two or more animals under discussion here, so the VERB in the sentence must (absolutely MUST) agree with the subject.

There's is a contraction of two words - there and is.

Is is the singular form of the verb, are is the plural; so the sentence should read:

There are lots of animals at the zoo.

Actually, it would be much better to choose another word for lots, since this is a pretty boring word (a bit like nice). Many would be a better choice.

There are many animals at the zoo.

That looks better.

2. He's been laying on the beach every day of his holiday.

Well, for a start, he's going to get sunburned and run the risk of skin cancer, but if he's so keen on getting a tan, who are we to interfere?

Secondly, he's one weird puppy ... laying is what chooks (hens) do, they lay eggs; people can lie on the beach, but laying ... hmmm. So this sentence should read:

He's been lying on the beach every day of his holiday.

3. She managed to buy the three last tickets for the concert.

Lucky girl - she's done the impossible because there can only ever be ONE last anything; she may well have bought the last three tickets, but not the three last tickets. So this sentence should read:

She managed to buy the last three tickets for the concert.

If you spotted all those errors - congratulations! But you still may like to brush up some of your other writing skills with this four-part writing course.

And if you missed one or more, you owe it to yourself to do something about it and improve your writing skills.

 

 

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