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What's the Big
Idea?
by Sid Smith
Normally, when someone asks you
"What's the big idea" they're ticked off about something. When I asked my client
Carlos that same question, he knew exactly what I meant.
The 30-page document he'd just sent me didn't have a Big Idea. It had a ton of
amazing concepts, many good ideas, and some excellent advice. It also meandered
all over the place and didn't have any kind of central theme to tie it all
together.
In Carlos' mind, it made sense because it was "what they should learn." As a
potential customer, I'm not interested in learning. I want to solve my problem,
heal my pain, or gain some awesome result.
What's the Big Idea? If you've been following AWAI, and in particular
Michael Masterson
for any length of time, you've read quite a bit about the Big Idea.
Copywriter John Forde defines the Big Idea as an "idea that can be sorted,
absorbed, and understood instantaneously."
I believe that the idea must also hint at solving the customer's biggest
problem.
To understand how this works, I dissected the process that Carlos and I went
through to get to his Big Idea. As you'll see, you end up with an "equation"
that stands a better chance of creating a sale.
Step 1: Start at the End
Your clients will want to lead with
their product. Carlos wants to "teach" his customers how to become strategists.
Carlos' thinking went like this:
"If I teach them certain concepts, then they will be able to grow their
businesses."
I asked Carlos to tell me stories about some of the work he'd done with his
clients. What I looked for was the kind of emotions his clients exhibited when
his work with them was complete.
His stories let me to understand that his clients felt "relieved, at peace, and
excited about their future." This told me that they're worried about the future
and uncertain of their ability to succeed.
The end result of our equation became "They want security, certainty AND
business growth." That is, the customer is thinking:
"I want to feel certain about my future, stop worrying, and know that I can keep
our business growing."
The key emotions they are experiencing are: worry, fear and doubt.
Step 2: Define the Starting Point
Defining the start is easy. What is
your client selling? In Carlos' case, he's selling a home-based study course on
developing a business strategy.
Sounds boring, doesn't it?
His customers don't want a strategy. They especially don't want to learn how to
become strategists.
However, ultimately, we want them to have an "aha" experience in which they
suddenly exclaim, "Eureka! I get it!" … . "If I learn how to properly
strategize, I'll never have to worry about my future again!"
Our job is to lead them down this garden path … a path filled with obstacles.
Step 3: Define the "In Between" Steps
Carlos' prospects aren't going to
leap to the conclusion that taking a home study course will get rid of their
worry and fear, and give them certainty and peace of mind (and wealth).
They've got to be led there … backwards.
Carlos and I came up with the following (simplified here):
Home Study Course →
Customer Value Proposition →
Create a Business Model →
Develop a Strategy →
Become Unique →
Security, Certainty & Growth
Those are the steps they go through to get to the end result they want.
Step 4: Reverse the Order
Now, we want to think of this from
the perspective of the customer.
"I want to stop stressing out about my future and to feel more secure."
"I understand that for this to happen, we've got to be unique in the marketplace
so that our customers think of us first and foremost."
"We need a plan for this to happen …"
"But if we're going to be unique, we can't do things like everyone else. I guess
this means we need to stop and come up with a different kind of strategy …"
"But a good strategy has to be based on something … That must be the business
model …"
"Oh … . I get it now … If I can figure out how to create more perceived value in
the minds of my customers, I can base my business model on this value
proposition, develop a strategy, plan around the strategy, and this will make us
unique, different, and better!"
"Hmmm … .. I should learn how to do all of that."
Step 5:
Developing the Big Idea
Remember that the Big Idea is "an
idea that can be sorted, absorbed, and understood instantaneously," and hints at
solving the customer's biggest problem.
We have to translate our equation into a statement that can easily be absorbed
and understood, and hints at solving the problem. It's no easy feat, and I
readily admit that ours still needs work.
That said, here's what we came up with:
"As the global economy shakes itself out of the recession, the ONLY way you can
be certain about your future is to give your customer exactly what he or she
wants BETTER than and DIFFERENT from your competition."
If we can get the reader to instantly agree with this statement, we can begin
leading him backwards down the path to the conclusion that "I need to learn how
to do this …"
That is: "If I learn this stuff from Carlos, I will stop worrying and be certain
about my future."
Notice that the statement doesn't say anything about developing strategies or
business models. That comes later in the body of the copy as you lead them down
the path.
The entire 30-page document works from and through the Big Idea, offering proof
that it's true and ideas they can use immediately to experience it for
themselves.
What I've discovered as the key to this process is to drive in reverse. Start
with what the customer most wants (emotionally) and work your way backwards …
letting him or her come to the conclusion that to "get to Z, I must start with
A."
Without the right Big Idea, you promotion doesn't have a chance of succeeding.
It's not an easy thing to master, but
Michael
Masterson and John Forde will show you how during their joint presentation
on Thursday of Bootcamp. Once you master The Big Idea, you'll secure your place
as an in-demand. Register today!
Read
more articles about marketing and
writing for your business here.
This article appears courtesy of
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