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The Write Way

4 January 2008

The Ease and Convenience of Modern Living

Greetings,

As we enter the first week of this brand, spanking new year of the 21st century, let's pause to review what we've learnt so far ...

Way back in the late 70s and early 80s (last century!) I vividly recall endless newspaper articles and current affairs shows alerting us to the need to prepare for all the Leisure Time we were going to have to deal with in the coming years. 

Business magazines earnestly encouraged us to look for niches to cater for the ever-increasing number of people who'd be looking for something to spend all their free time doing. 

We were told how computers were going to revolutionise society, take over all the humdrum jobs so we'd be free to travel, undertake educational courses, get fit, indulge in our hobbies ...

Hello?

Hand up if you've noticed any extra time going begging in your life?

No, me neither.

I was reminded of all this as I packed for our recent trip down to Melbourne to visit our daughter for Christmas. As an organised person of the 21st century, I started making A List a couple of weeks before we left, because I knew how little time I'd have as our departure drew closer and the things that Had to Be Done multiplied.

Up until a few years ago, a car trip away involved tossing our clothes into a suitcase, popping our Instamatic camera and a couple of extra rolls of film into my handbag and away we went.

This time, we tossed our clothes into a suitcase, and then I consulted The List ... digital camera and spare memory card, battery charger, car battery charger for camera, computer cable to download photos.

Laptop and extension lead, external hard drive, wireless modem and lead.

Mobile phones (two), phone chargers (two, because one size doesn't fit all).

Aargh!

Whatever happened to simplicity?

But the one thing I've learnt from this is that despite the hassle of lugging around more technology than existed on the first moon landing, I really can't do without it.

How could the Love of My Life and I find each other when we go off to do our own secret shopping for Christmas and then have to find each other in the zillions of others all doing the same if we didn't have our mobiles to call up and say, "Where are you?"

How could I take photos I can actually show in public without our spiffy little digital camera?  

And how could I keep in touch with you while driving the thousands of kilometres between home and Melbourne if I didn't have access to a handful of satellites tearing around in space and beaming down signals to my laptop?

Sigh ... I suppose we just need to accept the good with the bad since there's no point in crying fowl because we missed out on all the extra leisure time.

Well, not unless you're calling the chooks in or looking for eggs, in which case you'd be looking for the fowls.

We cry foul when things upset us.

The word 'foul' meanders to us from the Greek pyon meaning 'pus,'  which gave the Romans the Latin putere 'to stink.' From there the word wandered through Old German as ful and Old Norse as full, then the Gothic fuls before finally arriving in Olde England as ful, and then in Middle English it became foul.

Phew! What a journey!

 

This week's quiz words came via Bonnie Scotland and one of our Merry Band, Marian Dyer. Marian and I were chatting about Christmases Past (as you do) when she commented about how some of the magic that Christmas used to have has disappeared, "Mind you, that was before we had street lights here and the night sky was beautiful when you could see it without all the fluorescence (or whatever it is). There you go fluorescence, luminescence, iridescence ... sounds like it could be one of your themes."

Indeed it could ... so here, without further ado, are some -escence words to match up!

This week's quiz:

fluorescence, evanescence, effervescence, efflorescence, candescence, luminescence, iridescence, spumescence, rubescence, emollescence

1. degree of softness in a body beginning to melt which alters its shape; the first or lowest degree of fusibility 

2. glowing; incandescent

3. the event of fading and gradually vanishing from sight 

4. becoming red; blushing 

5. emission of light that does not derive energy from the temperature of the emitting body; caused by chemical, biochemical or crystallographic changes, the motions of subatomic particles or radiation-induced excitation of an atomic system; light from non-thermal sources 

6. light emitted during absorption of radiation of some other (invisible) wavelength 

7. foamy; foamlike; frothy

8. the process of bubbling as gas escapes 

9. the visual property of something having a milky brightness; a play of lustrous, changing colours 

10. gradual process of unfolding or developing; growth of salt crystals on a surface caused by evaporation of salt-laden water; the time and process of budding and unfolding of blossoms 

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Here are a couple of conversation fillers for your weekend ...

"It reads the same forwards as backwards," said a pallid Rome.

"This isn't real turtle soup," said Tom mockingly.

Last week's quiz:

1. abstract, ideal, CONCRETE, hypothetical

2. agenda, schedule, plan, FLEXIBILITY

3. atmosphere, mood, ambience, AFFABILITY

4. SALVATION, revelation, apocalypse, devastation

5. arduous, SIMPLE, tough, exacting

6. benevolent, altruistic, MALEVOLENT, generous

7. mockery, REPRODUCTION, burlesque, travesty

8. unqualified, categorical, unequivocal, PARTIAL

9. PERMIT, force, coerce, compel

10.complacent, SERIOUS pleased, nonchalant

A Little Something Extra

Last week, you started thinking about writing a mystery or short story, so this week, how about spending some time developing characters ...

Author, Susan Letham writes:

One hallmark of great writing is that it creates an intimate
relationship between writer and reader. Your aim isn't just
to tell the reader a story, but to share it with her, draw
her in, allow her to use her own imagination as well as
yours. By helping your reader co-create her experience you
hook her and keep her turning pages.

So, how do you go about getting your reader to work with you
this way? You do it by mapping main points and leaving space
for the reader to fill in the blanks, by drawing the outline
and handing your reader a box of crayons.

The easiest way to start putting this into practice is in
connection with characterization.

Read how to develop your characters.  

Word of the week:  Gasconade (n) No, this isn't some new fizzy drink ... It means 'extravagant boasting; boastful talk' and comes from the French gasconner meaning 'to boast.'

Oxymoron of the week: convenient banking system

And a Latin phrase as we glance back at the past ...

Forsan et haec olim meminisse iuvabit 

[FOHR-sahn AYT HEYK OH-leem may-mee-NEE-say ee-oo-WAY-beet]

(Perhaps someday we will look back upon these things with joy)

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